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[The Matrix Load Program]

Um... what was he saying?

Dude.... what the frell was up with that sound quality? It was atrocious and filled with background static. If you're going to do voice overs give the wav file a decent sprucing beforehand.

It was also pretty... well, boring. Interesting style and idea but really it was pointless - the humour was sparse but definitely existing. You could have done more definitely.

Animation was bog standard movie-clips that just repeated again and again and again with a few new objects appearing here and there.

You could have expanded on this a lot more and given much more humour to it. It's got the roots of something funny but seriously, too many problems, too slow and far too hard to understand what 'Neo' is saying.

FilamentProductions responds:

Ah. Well, thanks for the advice/critisism. Sorry about the sound though. I was going to fix it but I couldn't record it again because I couldn't time it right.

[All I Want]

Hmmm

Well drawn, good style but unfinished.

Seriously, why does it end so quickly? Why does it not even have a proper ending? The song was... meh. I dunno why you picked Britney's murdering of All I want over the much better Mariah Carrey original (Although, neither artists are exactly desirable these days).

If you'd used the original song and finished the movie - it could have been great. Hell, it could have been Front page material. Sadly, it's barely worth a 3 now.

I'd encourage you to finish it over the next week as possible - to have a completed version by Xmas Eve would be great. ^^

MD-Confessions responds:

hey thanks for your review. i dont know about britney spears or mariah carey so i didnt even know there was a nother version. but anyway, i think i AM finished lol this movie was suppose to be pointless. i just needed a break from my current flash project which is very long and tiring. i take breaks from time to time and make little stupid flashes and this was one of them. thanks for your review but i'm not adding anymore to this movie. =) merry xmas