Hmmm
Well drawn, good style but unfinished.
Seriously, why does it end so quickly? Why does it not even have a proper ending? The song was... meh. I dunno why you picked Britney's murdering of All I want over the much better Mariah Carrey original (Although, neither artists are exactly desirable these days).
If you'd used the original song and finished the movie - it could have been great. Hell, it could have been Front page material. Sadly, it's barely worth a 3 now.
I'd encourage you to finish it over the next week as possible - to have a completed version by Xmas Eve would be great. ^^